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Sometimes when I'm very I-should-be-asleep tired, I write poetry. When I do, I'll often do is make a game out of it, which I did here. The rules were simple: 

"Write as many poems that describe each of the Mane Six Kids in some way (pertaining to my story) in 30 minutes, using any kind of rhyme scheme (even nonsensical)." 

I was able to write four.


Anger growing, flowing rapid, 
Body slowing, showing vapid
Weakness; mind is breaking down -
Voices shouting without sound.


My weary lungs still hold their breath.
I will not come to grips with death.
Once more it bangs upon my door
Its appetite for blood and gore
Demanding sacrifice I swore
Would never reach this depth.


In death I'll stand alone, like stone,
Abandoned, cold, and on my own, 
My heart is absent of desire,
Waning like a faded fire, 
And as I sit, I wish so dire
To leave this empty throne.


This life, like a malicious bird, 
Has eyes fixed hungrily on the soul.
It circles, watches, without word,
Feeding on its crushed prey whole,
Devouring hope and love and faith,
Screeching, clawing, knashing hate,
Breaking lives beyond console
For sorrow is their fate. 

So yeah, this is what my exhausted mind came up with. I hope you guys enjoyed it anyway. 


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Hello, I'm Ryan and I love art and writing.

I'm a HUGE cartoon fan and animation and cinema have been interests of mine for a long time. Video games and sports are awesome as well and yes.....I am a brony. Overall, I love creativity and seeing what others have to contribute as well!

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"You're dead if you aim only for kids. Adults are only kids grown up, anyway." - Walt Disney

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Superior-Doc-Fossil Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2014
How are the grandkids coming along?
ShrapnelLeader Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2014
I've got all but two of them sketched.

As for coloring, I'm working on some right now. :)
Superior-Doc-Fossil Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2014
When can we expect the next one? I'm dying to know what the grandkids look like!
Finishing one right now. ;)
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Mailymaya Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Do you have a YouTube channel? If you do, then what is it called?
ShrapnelLeader Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014
I do. The link is in my front page profile.

The name is AWildBronyAppeared.
Mailymaya Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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ShrapnelLeader Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014
It's fine. Just a bit curious as to why I was invited to a group about belly button ponies when none of my work shows or mentions them.
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